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The year was 2013 at 5:45 pm in the late afternoon a random guy was wounding round the where house he was trying to find a gift for his son. He went and looked trough the lego section and there was nothing that he would like. So after that he went and looked around more. He went into the next one and it had robots all down it so he went down it. When he was walking slowly down the ale and then out the corner of his eye he saw all the robots look at him. He took a big breath and started to pick up the his pace. He started to go into a slow jog he unlocked his car from the entrance of the where house so he could get strait into his and drive off. He hoped into his car and his car started up with a roar then he put it into gear and drove off. As he was driving down the road he saw all the metal grey robots walking slowly be hind him. Finally he reached his house he quickly got out of car. He ran so fast into his house that he tripped going up the stairs. As he looked behind him going into the house he saw them coming up his drive way slowly. When he got in his house he ran straight to his gun cab net and unlocked it he said the code out load “8970” he said in a low voice he got out a long brown gun it was the latest model of the 303 riffle. He loaded it up with 2 huge bullets. He took it of saftey lock and headed for the window he took a deep breath and aimed he gun to one of the robots this one was at the door trying to saw the door open he saw the saw coming through the door he saw the sharp grey saw shinning in the sun. he slowey pulled the trigger and bang the gun shot out of the window and hit the creepy man eating robots with a smash brinnging the evil robot to the ground. But the more robots were walking slowing up the driveway with a chunt of we must destroy the humans. but with a nother bang he hit one other robot. But he soon relized that the robots were getting really angry with him for shooting the other robots. He ran down stairs and jumped in his car he sat there thinking if he should open the garage and reverse into them or nt but in a matter of time he made up his mind on what he should do. He reached for the garage opener and the door started to open