T4+Critical+Reasonable


 * Literacy - Writing Sample**

My Writing is called 'It Used to be Green Once'

It is a Critical Response to a Short Story written by Patricia Grace

I wrote it as an example of how to critically respond to a character in a story.

One of my learning goals was to analyse a character from a short story and give evidence from the text to support my judgements and comments about the character.

I achieved this because I Wrote a Good summery on what the mum was like and i explained what the text was about.


 * Teacher Comment**