T3+biography+....

__**Task:**__ Write a biography based on a fairy tale character, use your imagination and add your slant to the life events of the character. (This is not a recount of the fairy tale story, rather a possible timeline of the characters life) __**Learning Intentions:**__ __**Integration with other curriculum areas:**__ __Guided Reading__ - Unpacking of short biographies. __Inquiry__ - TVNZ Web Challenge 2010 __**Success Criteria:**__ My writing is clear about whom I am writing about. My introduction makes the reader want to read on. I have written in the third person consistently. I have sequenced a series of events in chronological order. I have written information using paragraphs. I have used a tense that is appropriate to the time. I have used time and contrast connectives to link different events. I have used succinct and descriptive nouns, verbs, adjectives and adverbs I have used a variety of sentence beginnings, lengths and structures for effect. ||
 * **Fairy Tale Biography**
 * Students will gain an understanding about the structure of a biography
 * Students will learn how deeper & surface language features shape their writing
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 In the deep dark forest there is a family of wolfs theres a special wolf named potash. Potash was born on the 19/16/2001 .He has a mum named mrs wolf and and his dads named mr wolf. His mums job is a soup maker and his dads job is a electrician. Potash is an only child.

When Potash was four he got a shock on a power line he simply tried to swing off it but zzzzzzzzzzzzz and he was on the ground in pain a lot of pain. Later on that year. his mum just about cut of his hand and put it in the soup she was making for tea.

In 2006 he had his first day at school he had no friend the first day <;or the second day that made him really depressed. He never seemed to have lunch money because bullies used to steal it. At cross country he came second thats because thats the only thing that he was good.

A couple of years past he got a job as a stop and go sign person and he got a girlfriend At this time he was very happy they had kids a lived happily ever after. Not really they didn’t get that far because he picked his nose and his girlfriend saw him then walked out the door and she was gone for ever.

In 2008 he was walking and he saw a little red girl he followed her to where she was going. He followed him to a house a little wooden one in the and it was about 12 o clock and he got chopped up into pieces and was never seen again.His parents held a funeral at there house. ||
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