T2+Explanation+Respiratory+System

L.I. To write an explanation with a growing understanding of the deeper features & surface features appropriate to genre **Explanation - Audience Awareness & Purpose** S.C. I have indicated purpose & audience in my brainstorm S.C. I have used language appropriate to my target audience that is also linked directly with my explanation || **Features of an Explanation** ||
 * **Explanation**
 * =The Respiratory System.=

How does the Respiratory system work?
== We breathe to keep our selves alive and because we can't store any oxygen in our bodies so we breathe in and out. We breathe in oxygen and then it goes through our body and in our blood. Secondly we breathe out a thing called carbon dioxide witch is a harmful gas.We breathe by our lungs they are inside our ribcage then there is a thing called a diaphragm it goes up and down but then the rib cage and lungs expand in order to let the diaphragm go up in down properly. == || **Identify Purpose/Audience** Purpose is to explain how the respiratory system works Audience, people wanting to find out information about the respiratory system e.g an asthmatic or student doing research

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 * 1) Statement or Question to be explained
 * How does the Respiratory System Work?


 * 1) Explanation arranged in sequence of steps
 * Why we breathe
 * What we breathe
 * How the respiratory system works
 * Lungs, ribcage, diaphragm, nose & mouth
 * Lungs, bronchus, alveoli, capillaries, blood
 * Breathe in Oxygen & breathe out Carbon dioxide
 * Keeping lungs healthy

**Time Connectives** First, Secondly, Then, Next

**Timeless present tense/Passive Voice** e.g. Oxygen then moves.. , Oxygen is breathed in the.. , Oxygen is pasted to the..,

e.g. When exercising breathing becomes more rapid
 * Exact details**

**Technical Terms Respiratory system, lungs, ribcage, oxygen, capillaries etc ** ||
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